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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:02:05 GMT -5
Here is one of mine -
Grim His hood is black as night His face a fearsome sight His blade is always keen With its metallic sheen When he comes your life is over There is nowhere to find cover His scythe is not to intimidate He brings it to seal your fate
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Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:03:20 GMT -5
Good work! I love the rhyming! Can't wait for more!
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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:14:58 GMT -5
But wait theres more!!
Awaken Me The fire is a blazing And I am a lazing About in my chair Without a single care I start to fall asleep And a log begins to creep Out of the fire The situation becomes dire But I do not awaken My life the fire has taken
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Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:26:46 GMT -5
Awesome! I love this one!
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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:28:00 GMT -5
I should of called it Public health warning
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Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 28, 2011 3:28:35 GMT -5
great work loved it!
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Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 28, 2011 3:31:08 GMT -5
enjoyed reading these
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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:31:59 GMT -5
I enjoyed writing them lol
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Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:32:40 GMT -5
Well then write some more lol
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Post by gerlock on Sept 11, 2011 15:09:26 GMT -5
The big fat cat Sat on the big fat rat and made the fat rat flat like a cowpat
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Post by VioletDolphin on Sept 14, 2011 23:39:50 GMT -5
;Dlmao!!
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