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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:02:05 GMT -5
Here is one of mine -
Grim
His hood is black as night
His face a fearsome sight
His blade is always keen
With its metallic sheen
When he comes your life is over
There is nowhere to find cover
His scythe is not to intimidate
He brings it to seal your fate
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Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:03:20 GMT -5
Good work! I love the rhyming! Can't wait for more!
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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:14:58 GMT -5
But wait theres more!!
Awaken Me
The fire is a blazing
And I am a lazing
About in my chair
Without a single care
I start to fall asleep
And a log begins to creep
Out of the fire
The situation becomes dire
But I do not awaken
My life the fire has taken
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Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:26:46 GMT -5
Awesome! I love this one!  |
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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:28:00 GMT -5
I should of called it Public health warning
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Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 28, 2011 3:28:35 GMT -5
great work loved it!
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Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 28, 2011 3:31:08 GMT -5
enjoyed reading these |
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Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:31:59 GMT -5
I enjoyed writing them lol
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Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:32:40 GMT -5
Well then write some more lol
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Post by gerlock on Sept 11, 2011 15:09:26 GMT -5
The big fat cat
Sat on the big fat rat
and made the fat rat flat like a cowpat
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Post by VioletDolphin on Sept 14, 2011 23:39:50 GMT -5
;Dlmao!!
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