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Aug 5, 2011 6:05:04 GMT -5
Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 5, 2011 6:05:04 GMT -5
Cobble Stone Courts.
Night after night, dream after dream. I go to a place, that I’ve never been.
How did I get here, where is this place? A spark of a memory, a familiar face.
All feels correct, a heart-felt embrace. A feeling of belonging, within this dreams space.
I notice a dwelling, that I have seen before. I know that I am dreaming, yet see and sense no flaw.
Cobble stone courts, seats made of stone. dwellings upon dwellings, is what I was shown.
On closer inspection, i spied a stream. And as soon as I did, I awoke from my dream.
Night after night, dream after dream. I go to a place, that I’ve never been.-RB
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Aug 5, 2011 6:17:10 GMT -5
Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 5, 2011 6:17:10 GMT -5
Very nice! Interesting dream. I like how it starts and ends. Very catchy!
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Aug 6, 2011 1:31:18 GMT -5
Post by gerlock on Aug 6, 2011 1:31:18 GMT -5
cool beans!!
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Aug 7, 2011 19:30:12 GMT -5
Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 7, 2011 19:30:12 GMT -5
thanks!
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Aug 9, 2011 2:55:16 GMT -5
Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 9, 2011 2:55:16 GMT -5
You should post more poetry!
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Aug 28, 2011 3:32:51 GMT -5
Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 28, 2011 3:32:51 GMT -5
yeah i should post more ty
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Aug 28, 2011 3:35:18 GMT -5
Post by vibrations2011 on Aug 28, 2011 3:35:18 GMT -5
Advancement
All that was and all that’s been, watched and waited to belong. All that is, was watching also, blending in just like a song.
All that was, lived in the dramas, all that’s been, lived in the past. All that is, lives in the present, watching moments that were cast. All that was and all that’s been, cast there seeds to feel alive. All that is, has always been, so has no need to feel that vibe.
All that was, thrived on the gossip, all that’s been, on flashbacks reminisced. All that is, thrived on advancement, a power that’s been subconsciously missed.-RB
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Aug 28, 2011 3:43:21 GMT -5
Post by gerlock on Aug 28, 2011 3:43:21 GMT -5
Thats a good one Very deep stuff.
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Aug 28, 2011 3:44:17 GMT -5
Post by VioletDolphin on Aug 28, 2011 3:44:17 GMT -5
Well done! I like it! Very thoughtful poem!
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Sept 5, 2011 2:43:50 GMT -5
Post by vibrations2011 on Sept 5, 2011 2:43:50 GMT -5
ty ty
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